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Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement? How far does colour influence people’s healt and capacity for work?

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It is a
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 fact, different
colour
 reflects their image many of us believe and
trust
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 that different
colours
has
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its
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 influences
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 personality trait of self-image
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 decoration into-design for some of the rooms. A healthcare setting predicts the future.
Therefore
 in my opinion the given statement is true.
Firstly
,many psychologists.In the past have done research on multiple
colours
what
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 they indicate and omit their thoughts depending on the choice of
colour
for instance
,those wearing white,blue and green
colours
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strongly desired profound skills in various places and functions.
Moreover
,"The India Flag" has three different
colours
 which reflect peace and
mihghty
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mighty
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.In the same way different countries in their own
colour
 code.
Secondly
,the majority of
health care
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healthcare
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 organizations build in
a decent
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decent colours
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colours
such
 as light blue and white.The function of different
office
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resemble
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 the same
it
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apply
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important
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. And employers
forced
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 to wear
dress
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dresses
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 for their
employee
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employees
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.For
illustrate
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,
collection
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 of
cv
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CVs
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 may be 30%.Dress code and of
interviewer
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the interviewer
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. Gives the confidence level in a critical situation to
solove
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solve
 the problem
Additionally
, 90% of employers
higher
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 on knowledge and efficacy based on academic and service records.
To conclude
, the various
colours
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its
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 own importance in society.Apart
a
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choice of
colour
 many believe and hope which not be considered seriously.But vitally important is skills and
preseverance
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perseverance
 to manage the situation will be notified in the nature queue.
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