In the future all cars, buses and trucks Will be The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages Of driverless Vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
Due to
development
of modern technology and its achievements, most Correct article usage
the development
of
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apply
the
scientists and experts are of the opinion that cars, buses and trucks will be controlled without Correct article usage
apply
driver
in the future and people who are commuters and passengers will be only inside those vehicles. İn my opinion, Fix the agreement mistake
drivers
however
there are a Add the comma(s)
,however
lot
merits and Add the preposition
oflot
dimerits
of Correct your spelling
demerits
this
, its advantages surpass its disadvantages.
To begin
, as I said before, i
think that there are several good and bad points. Change the capitalization
I
For example
, one of the big advantages of being
driverless cars and buses is that will not happen any car accidents or at least Unnecessary verb
apply
quantity
of Correct article usage
the quantity
this
will go down in the future. İn our Correct pronoun usage
these
time
, reasons of
accidents are related to human errors Change preposition
for
such
as being drunk or pay
little attention to important signs. İmprovement of technology, Wrong verb form
paying
this
will decrease significantly. Furthermore
, people already spend their time
to do
different useful things Change the verb form
doing
such
as reading book
or investigating essential information so as to widen their outlooks Fix the agreement mistake
books
instead
of spending their time
by driving on roads. Thus
, they are able to devise new innovative technologies by thinking out of the box and going to
the extra Change preposition
apply
miles
because of having adequate Fix the agreement mistake
mile
time
. Also
, some researchs
have proved that existing of some dangerous diseases Correct your spelling
research
researchers
researches
has
been caused by sitting too much in the car. Developing with driverless cars, Correct subject-verb agreement
have
this
types of illnesses will be able to decline.
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these
On the other hand
, it have
some critical Change the verb form
has
dimerits
of Correct your spelling
demerits
merits
this
. As an example, most of the current employees will be unemployed in the future and it can lead to big problems. Moreover
, even though improvements in technology
field, there are times when some devices can not be controlled because of happening break downs and Add an article
the technology
thus
accidents could happen.
İn conclusion, i
think that Change the capitalization
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its
plus points Correct your spelling
it's
excel
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Excel
due to
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the i
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counted reasons.Change the capitalization
I
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