In the future all cars, buses and trucks Will be The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages Of driverless Vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

In the future all cars, buses and trucks Will be The only people

travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers.

Do you think the advantages Of driverless Vehicles outweigh the

disadvantages?
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of modern technology and its achievements, most
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scientists and experts are of the opinion that cars, buses and trucks will be controlled without
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in the future and people who are commuters and passengers will be only inside those vehicles. İn my opinion,
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there are a
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merits and
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demerits
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, its advantages surpass its disadvantages.
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think that there are several good and bad points.
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driverless cars and buses is that will not happen any car accidents or at least
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of
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will go down in the future. İn our
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accidents are related to human errors
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little attention to important signs. İmprovement of technology,
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will decrease significantly.
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different useful things
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as reading
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or investigating essential information so as to widen their outlooks
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of spending their
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by driving on roads.
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, they are able to devise new innovative technologies by thinking out of the box and going
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the extra
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because of having adequate
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.
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, some
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have proved that existing of some dangerous diseases
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been caused by sitting too much in the car. Developing with driverless cars,
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types of illnesses will be able to decline.
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some critical
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demerits
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of
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. As an example, most of the current employees will be unemployed in the future and it can lead to big problems.
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, even though improvements in
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field, there are times when some devices can not be controlled because of happening break downs and
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accidents could happen. İn conclusion,
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think that
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counted reasons.
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