In the future all cars, buses and trucks Will be The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages Of driverless Vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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of modern technology and its achievements, most

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scientists and experts are of the opinion that cars, buses and trucks will be controlled without

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in the future and people who are commuters and passengers will be only inside those vehicles. İn my opinion,

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however

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there are a

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merits and

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demerits

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, its advantages surpass its disadvantages.

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, as I said before,

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think that there are several good and bad points.

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, one of the big advantages of

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driverless cars and buses is that will not happen any car accidents or at least

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of

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will go down in the future. İn our

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accidents are related to human errors

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as being drunk or

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little attention to important signs. İmprovement of technology,

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will decrease significantly.

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, people already spend their

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different useful things

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as reading

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or investigating essential information so as to widen their outlooks

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of spending their

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by driving on roads.

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, they are able to devise new innovative technologies by thinking out of the box and going

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the extra

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because of having adequate

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, some

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have proved that existing of some dangerous diseases

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been caused by sitting too much in the car. Developing with driverless cars,

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types of illnesses will be able to decline.

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, it

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some critical

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demerits

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. As an example, most of the current employees will be unemployed in the future and it can lead to big problems.

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, even though improvements in

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field, there are times when some devices can not be controlled because of happening break downs and

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accidents could happen. İn conclusion,

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think that

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plus points

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minus points

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counted reasons.