Some people say that health care and education should be the responsibility of the government but others think that it is the responsibility of the individuals themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some say that

healthcare

and

education

should be the

responsibility

of the authority but others believe that it is the

responsibility

of the

people

themselves. In my opinion,

pay

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for health care and

education

should be

responsibility

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the responsibility

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of the

government

on the grounds that

healthcare

and

education

is

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are

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basic

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a basic

the basic

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need for

citizens

and

also

citizens

have paid taxes

for

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to

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government

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the government

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and

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apply

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in

ordeto

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order to

enhance

relationship

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the relationship

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among

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between

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citizens

and their

government

. On the one hand, some think

healthcare

and

education

is

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are

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responsibility

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the responsibility

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of the

people

.

This

is because the

government

do not have enough budget to support

healthcare

and

education

. To illustrate, the governments have many

responsibility

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responsibilities

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to

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for

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funding namely, environmental issues, agriculture, and space projects.

Therefore

,

people

should support themselves in order to pay for

healthcare

and

education

.

On the other hand

, I would like to agree with those

people

who believe

the

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that

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healthcare

and

education

is

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are

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responsibility

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the responsibility

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of the authority .

To begin

with,

healthcare

and

education

is

basic

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a basic

the basic

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need for every

citizens

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citizen

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, which mean

government

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the government

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should support these sectors in order to provide

high quality

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high-quality

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livnig

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living

standards for their

citizens

.

Moreover

,

people

have paid taxes

for

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to

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government

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the government

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.

Consequently

, the

government

should use these funds in order to provide free

healthcare

and

education

for all

citizens

.

Additionally

, if the

government

provide free

education

and health care

this

can create good

relatioships

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relationships

between

government

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the government

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and their

citizens

.

As a result

,

citizens

will become

happinees

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happiness

about the performance of

government

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the government

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, which mean

citizens

will feel more belonging to their

government

.

To sum up

, I totally believe the

government

should be responsible for

healthcare

and

education

because these services are basic

need

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needs

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for

people

, and

citizens

have paid taxes to

government

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the government

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, and

also

this

step can

boosts

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boost

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relationship

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the relationship

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among

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between

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citizens

and their

government

.