A road near your home is damaged. Please write your town/city council to complain about it. In your letter •tell them who you are and where you live; •explain the nature of your complaint; • say what you would like them to do about it.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter to bring your attention towards the damaged pathway nearby my house. My name is Jesus and I am living on Beaver Valley Drive, it occurs on the main intersection which is Mclaughlin and Sandalwood Avenue.

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year, I moved to the modern area because it is nearby my workplace and

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has access to different stores

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why I chose it for my living purpose. I am continuously seeing the damaged line since I came here on August 13, 2022. At that time, I thought the city council will look into it and take action, but nothing has happened. After waiting for a long, I had to send a letter. The city council needs to take quick action because the damage is becoming wider with the passage of time. Before, there was a small hole on the side of the road, but now it becomes a kind of tunnel that would definitely put harm to human life. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Jesus

kamalveerkaur26Tue Aug 08 2023

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

175 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Nowadays it is seen that people celebrate other cultures within their local cultures, do you think it is good for our society?

The best way for a country to prepare for the future is to invest more resources in its young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

You are going for a one-week vacation and your friend agreed to stay at your place while you are away. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter, you should: thank her/him and tell the dates of your holiday explain how he/she enters the house describe what you expect him/her to do.