The chart below show the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph illustrates the variation of three different crimes in New Port City

center

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from 2003 to 2012.

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there was a reduction in all

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three areas of crimes

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2003 to 2012. It was noticeable the reduction in

Burlgary

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burglary

and car theft

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, in Robbery the trend was steady. First of all, I will describe the trends of Bulgary. In 2003 there were reported around 3500

incidents

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these crimes.

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, there was a

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reduction between the years 2004 and 2008.

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, it can be observed that from that year until 2012, the trend

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stabilized in about 1400

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, I will describe car theft crime. In 2003 there were reported about 2700

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. During the next

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slightly

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decline in

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crime.

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arround

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around

the year 2008 the trend

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stabilized until the year 2012.

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, it is worth noting that Robbery had

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fluctuation in the number of

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during the period of time

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analysed

, with a report number of about 600.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words incidents with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

171 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

changes
took place
three different areas of crime
New Port city center
from 2003 to 2012
summarise
information
selecting
reporting
main features
comparisons
where relevant
overall
crime rates
downward trend
most significant drop
observed
theft
burglary
on the other hand
slight increase
drug-related offenses
same period
declined steadily
significant decrease
10-year period
in contrast
slight decline
remaining years
violent crimes
relatively stable
slight fluctuation
conclusion
recorded
small increase
initially
then declined slightly

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