The chart below show the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the variation of three different crimes in New Port City
center
from 2003 to 2012.
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centre
Overall
there was a reduction in all the
three areas of crimes Correct article usage
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during
2003 to 2012. It was noticeable the reduction in Change preposition
from
Burlgary
and car theft Correct your spelling
burglary
while
, in Robbery the trend was steady.
First of all, I will describe the trends of Bulgary. In 2003 there were reported around 3500 incidents
on
these crimes. Change preposition
of
Then
, there was a sharply
reduction between the years 2004 and 2008. Change the adverb
sharp
However
, it can be observed that from that year until 2012, the trend was
stabilized in about 1400 Unnecessary verb
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incidents
.
Secondly
, I will describe car theft crime. In 2003 there were reported about 2700 incidents
. During the next years
there Add a comma
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were
a Change the verb form
was
slightly
decline in Change the adverb
slight
the
crime. Correct article usage
apply
Then
, arround
the year 2008 the trend Correct your spelling
around
was
stabilized until the year 2012. Unnecessary verb
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Adittionally
, it is worth noting that Robbery had Correct your spelling
Additionally
little
fluctuation in the number of Add an article
a little
incidents
during the period of time analized
, with a report number of about 600.Correct your spelling
analysed
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