The increasing availability of low-cost airlines now lets people travel around the world. Some feel this is a positive development while others think it is negative overall. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
A controversial issue is whether the increasing disponibility of affordable flights worldwide is an advantage or a disadvantage. The paragraphs below will outline both sides of
this
trend and explain why I believe the benefits of Linking Words
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phenomenon are stronger.
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To begin
with, there are two main reasons why the rising amount of low-priced airlines has positive impacts on society. First of all, it provides another means of transportation and, Linking Words
therefore
, allows the population to have a variety of ways to commute. Linking Words
For instance
, if tickets by bus or train are sold out, people can keep their schedules if they find aeroplane tickets at the same average price. Another cogent justification is that it can enable poorer classes of the community to travel. Linking Words
As a result
, individuals from all sectors of society can have different cultural experiences, despite not having the same financial opportunities.
In stark contrast, some individuals deem that the increasing number of low-cost flights available should not be encouraged. The main argument is that it will diminish the sense of exclusivity the extortionate prices gave. Linking Words
Consequently
, rich and poor people would travel sitting side by side. Linking Words
Furthermore
, another reason given is that it can lead to delays in flights Linking Words
due to
congestion. With the rising amount of aeroplanes, air corporations had to adjust to the overcrowded traffic, Linking Words
although
some problems can still occur, Linking Words
such
as delays and cancellations.
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To conclude
, I believe both sides have their merits. On balance, Linking Words
however
, it seems that the impacts caused by these more affordable aeroplane tickets on society are more meaningful, as they can provide unique travel experiences for less fortunate social classes and augment the variety of transportation options for those who intend to go on a trip.Linking Words
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task response
Provide a more balanced argument by elaborating on the negative impacts of the increasing availability of low-cost flights.
coherence and cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph is logically structured with clear topic sentences and supporting details.
lexical resource
Expand your range of vocabulary to include more varied and precise expressions.
grammatical range
Work on using a wider variety of complex sentence structures and reducing errors in sentence construction and punctuation.