The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a paricular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a paricular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017
The provided line graph illustrates the annual tourist influx to a specific
Caribbean
island
over a span of 7 years, commencing from 2010. In broad terms, there is a consistent upward trend in the total number of tourists visiting the
Caribbean
island
throughout the entire timeframe.
Additionally
, the data indicates that the preference for
visitors
staying on
cruise
ships was consistently lower than that for those electing to extend their sojourn on the
island
for most of the period. In the initial year, the aggregate count of tourists venturing to the
Caribbean
island
stood at precisely 1
million
. Out of these, 75,000 individuals chose to reside on the
island
,
while
the remainder opted for accommodation on
cruise
ships. In the subsequent two years,
although
a minor decline is observed, reaching a nadir of just under 0.25
million
for
visitors
staying on
cruise
ships, the choice to stay on the
island
remained more prevalent, with a figure of 1.25
million
visitors
. In the ultimate year, a remarkable surge is evident, with the total number of
visitors
to the
Caribbean
island
skyrocketing to 3.5
million
.
Likewise
, the count of tourists favouring
cruise
ship accommodations underwent a substantial upswing, reaching precisely 2
million
, surpassing the count for those selecting the
island
as their residence (1.5
million
).
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