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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph shows the annual income of languages-related jobs in US dollars in five cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph shows the annual income of languages-related jobs in US dollars in five cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The graph illustrates the yearly salary of
language
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-related work in five
cities
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 including
Mexico
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, Dubai, Paris , Munich and Toronto. The
income
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 is
also
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 compared in US
dollars
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. Jobs are divided into
three
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 job
roles
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 which are Interpreter, Translator and
Language
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 Teacher.
Overall
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, workers in
Mexico
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 received the lowest
income
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 in the
three
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roles
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, least than double, compared to another 4
cities
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.
However
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, in all
cities
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 except
Mexico
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, Interpreter is at the top of yearly
income
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. Translators and
Language
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 Teachers have fluctuated. In
Mexico
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, all
three
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 job
roles
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 get almost 20,000 US
dollars
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, which is 1/3 compared to other
cities
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.
In contrast
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, Toronto is the city that received the highest
income
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 in
three
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roles
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, up to 80,000 US
dollars
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 for the Interpreter role,and about 60,000 US
dollars
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 for translator and
Language
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 Teacher
roles
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. Dubai, Paris and Munich have fluctuated tend between translators and
Language
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 teachers,and still received the highest
income
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 for interpreters, 75,000 in Munich in 65,000 Paris and 60,000 in Dubai, respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cities, mexico, income, dollars, three, roles, language with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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