Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (forexample, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent times advanced hardware is being used increasingly often to observe

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' behaviour. Most of the

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, they are clueless that

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is happening.

While

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technology has numerous advantages, it has just as many disadvantages.

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and disadvantages of human observation, and I will provide my own opinion on the matter

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. On the one hand, surveillance can help make the world a better place.

Firstly

, it can reduce the number of committed crimes. Using security cameras, the police can determine the rulebreaker and give them a deserving punishment.

For instance

, the credit system in China is reliant on security cameras and AI. Whenever a person commits a crime, the AI detects them, compares their face with everyone registered in the database, and punishes them with a decrease in credit score.

Secondly

, in case a person goes missing, law enforcement could pinpoint their exact location using their

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.

On the other hand

,

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is a huge privacy concern. First and foremost, many phone apps are spying on us. In fact, every app does that to some extent, and several companies sell

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data

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as our recent search history, websites we visited and our personal information to third parties, which is an enormous privacy concern. Not only that, but the person using these apps is completely clueless that their phone is spying on them.

Last

but not least, cybercriminals can break into the system with the purpose of blackmailing people, asking

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for important documents and information or outright

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information with no way of restoring

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As a result

, a large amount of people can lose their work documents

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or important family photos. In conclusion, I think that devices used to monitor people's behaviour

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major downsides in terms of privacy,

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it is undeniable that

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technology could establish peace in countries.