Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true,
being
famous is what everyone wants, but it comes with some responsibilities. Correct word choice
that being
People
in our societies particularly youngsters get easily influenced by the fame, glam, money, and position of any celebrity. Also
, these days media mainly showcase their high-class lifestyles rather than the hard work they did to reach that position and therefore
send the wrong message to society and
especially to our young generation. I am convinced with the opinionCorrect word choice
apply
almost completely
and would give my supportive points for the same in Rephrase
apply
this
essay.
People
often set their role models from a young age and look up to them. These days, due to
online social media networks and other twenty-four hours
entertainment news channels, it is easy to follow Correct your spelling
twenty-four-hour
celebrity's
daily lifestyles and expensive possessions. Change noun form
celebrities'
Subsequently
, this
certainly affects youngsters most and so they want everything like them easily and quickly without looking at the implications. For example
, In Indian cricket, Mr Sachin Tendulkar, a famous batsman earned fame and money at a very young age with persistence and perfection in his cricket game, however
, he did not complete his school education. Unfortunately, many school boys give his example for skipping school classes but never even put their efforts and interest into the game.
,Furthermore
, to emphasise, it is not an influencer or our children's mistake here, nevertheless
it is due to
our own lack of discipline and good guidance and values in the families and societies. Therefore
, it is required to tell what is important in life and how much hard work is needed to become like their role model and to look for their talent and consistency to get that position.
In conclusion, glamorous people
and their wealth do influence young people
and for the aforementioned reasons, I completely agree with this
opinion.Submitted by sonyasharma01 on
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