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Internet based courses have become a popular alternative to university based courses. Some people prefer this type of learning because they don't need to attend lectures. Others argue it is important to study at universities. Discuss both sides/ views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, there are some people saying online
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 becoming popular is a positive change because lectures are not necessary,
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 others argue that studying at universities is still essential. I will discuss both sides and give my opinion. On the one hand, studying in the physical classroom at university has loads of benefits for
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.
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, it is very convenient for
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 to ask questions when they don't understand the knowledge or have some different ideas, which is an important kind of interaction that can help them to think about the knowledge precisely and deeply.
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, offline
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 allow
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 to
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 in groups efficiently, they can learn about how to assign tasks and get results
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 others. In many prestigious universities,
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 kind of skill, or leadership, is the key to cultivating learners.
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, during various activities and
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,
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 have more opportunities to meet up with each other and be exposed to different cultures.
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, universities are still essential platforms to communicate with professors and classmates for learners.
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, online classes have many reasons to be common in modern society. People are living at a fast pace these days,
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 they all have a tight schedule and don't want to spend much time commuting to school. They can
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 internet-based
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 wherever they want in the world.
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, during the epidemic period, the internet plays a great role to allow
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 to
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 at home when locked down. On top of that, online
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 allow
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 to
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 at their own pace. High-lever pupils can progress faster and lower-level ones
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 can benefit from a lower studying pace because of more suitable
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 planned for them. To put it in another way, studying online offers us more space to choose schedules and locations. In conclusion, studying in offline classes at university is a key part for
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, and I agree that online
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 can be an important supplement to offline
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 rather than to be a substitute.

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