Some people think that too much money has been spent looking after and repairing old buildings, so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, some sectors of society believe that huge investments are being made in order to repair and conserve old
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, which brings the idea that it may be better to demolish them and replace them with modern ones. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with
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, as demolishing and rebuilding a new building would cost much more money, without thinking about what would governments do to relocate residents in the meantime.
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with, if we are considering cultural patrimony, usually they are old
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because they are part of our history, which does not make sense at all to demolish them as we would be knocking down our own history and culture.
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, there are beautiful and enormous historical
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in Europe that are now museums, being critical to preserving cultural knowledge.
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means that taking these
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down because they are too old and expensive, would not make any sense for humankind's cultural preservation.
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to
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, if we are thinking of residential
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, it is a fact that the majority of the
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are old, which is equal to demolishing hundreds of homes, which implies much more money than taking care of them, without considering that all the people who live there need to be relocated in the meantime.
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, it is known that Russia and other ex-soviet countries still concentrate an enormous number of
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from the middle and late 1900s, which conducts to a massive population living in these places, being impossible to make a complete renewal for
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a population.
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clarifies how crazy would be to have
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process done. In conclusion, even if some people think that looking after and repairing old
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cost too much money, it is not as expensive compared to demolishing and remaking them. Just thinking about the massive investment that
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would take and the people who would need to be relocated, gives an idea of the complexity of
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matter.
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why I believe that it is preferable to keep investing in their conservation
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other
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are being constructed in anther available places.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Preservation
  • Restoration
  • Demolition
  • Architectural heritage
  • Cultural significance
  • Tourist attraction
  • Urban landscape
  • Sustainability
  • Conservation
  • Economic benefits
  • Historical landmarks
  • Urban renewal
  • Infrastructure
  • Maintenance costs
  • Modern amenities
  • Building regulations
  • Community identity
  • Heritage conservation
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