The map show the changes that took place in the bookstore before and after 2000.
The map compares the differences
about
the construction of the bookstore in 2000 and today.
Change preposition
in
Overall
, in the past, the bookstore used to have two large bookshelves of fictions
and no table for sitting there. Today, there Fix the agreement mistake
fiction
are
seating Change the verb form
is
area
for readers and there are a non-fiction
bookshelf instead
of fiction
one.
As can be seen from the maps, there used to have two large areas for Correct article usage
a fiction
fiction
bookshelves in
the left side Change preposition
on
from
the entrance. Change preposition
of
However
, the fiction
one is reduced in size now because these areas are converted into 5 differents
Correct your spelling
different
area
Fix the agreement mistake
areas
such
as art, hobbies, cookery, fiction
, and non-fiction
in the same areas. In addition
, there are three tables which are replaced next to non-
Correct article usage
the non-fiction
fiction
area
.
In the area
which is near entrance
, there was the same as Correct article usage
the entrance
the
past with 3 zones Change preposition
in the
such
as travel, new books, service
desk. Correct word choice
and service
Futhermore
, today, there was a new cafe Correct your spelling
Furthermore
instead
of non-fiction
which used to be there in the past.Submitted by lethigialinh77 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "instead, such".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, fiction with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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