The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020 which predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons were relevant.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020 which predictions for 2030 and 2040.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons were relevant.
The line graph illustrates the
percentage
of preparation living in the Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia from 1970 to 2020 with predictions for 2030 and 2040. As can be seen, the
percentage
of the
population
in four Asian countries had a significant growth from 1972 to 2020 and
also
it is projected to rise next 20-year period. In 1970 the
percentage
of people who lived in the Philippines was 31 per cent
then
levelled out the same for a decade
then
it started to increase by 49% in 1990.
Although
it experienced a 10% decline, it grew substantially by the end of 2020 and
also
it will be going up by 50% in 2040. The
percentage
of the
population
in Malaysia started at 30%,
whereas
it rose sharply to about 75% in 2020,
however
, it is going to increase to 10% by 2040. The
percentage
of the
population
in Thailand and Indonesia were 90% and 12%, respectively in 1970. both these countries' populations increased by 30% in 2000. even though Indonesia climbed up 55 per cent in 2020 and Thailand levelled out at 30% until 2019. there is a prediction for rising more than 30% by the end of 2040. To sums up, the graph demonstrates that the
percentage
of the
population
is growing and
this
is an upward trend for the future.
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