Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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A considerable number of people are struggling with unpleasant situations in their
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. Some argue that it is better to take
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to improve the situation,
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some suggest that it is better for us to accept that. I have a balanced idea of that. I tend to say it is much better to choose an active approach towards
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's
problems
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, but I believe there are some situations that can not be changed. There are several reasons why we should do our bests for developing the
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we dream about.
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, Some would say that changing most
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bad situations is easy and only takes courage.
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, if we stop trying to improve our
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, we will end up having a
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that we do not like at all.
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, it is probable that we do not succeed at getting completely out of an undesired condition,
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, at least, we can make that slightly better.
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, I believe there are significant advantages to trying actively for a good change in our
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.
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, Some
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are not easy to address, and in some cases, it might be even impossible to solve them.
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, if an individual is not satisfied with his appearance, there is no way to change that.
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, I suggest that there are some
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that we should learn to live with them.
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, we face so many
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in our daily
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, and it is not wise to fight all of them
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because it will put us under a lot of stress. We should
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note that changing requires a lot of energy, and we must be careful about the matters we are putting
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on. In conclusion, I restate that it is important to keep trying to develop a favourable
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, but in terms of unchangeable or less important matters, a man should learn how to accept them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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