If a product is good or it meets people's needs,people will buy it. So advertising is unnecessary and no more entertainment. Agree or disagree

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I agree that a

product

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that is

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good or meets everyone’s needs,

people

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will buy it can bring many benefits to the customer, I do not agree that quantity is not the deciding factor. It is undeniable that

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action has brought many positive effects. One of the most important benefits is letting

people

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know about new products. Because when a new brand opens,

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will create an advertisement to introduce the

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to consumers. Another benefit is letting

people

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know the price of the

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in advance. Many

people

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when buying goods are very interested in the price, if there is an article about the

product

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, they will buy it immediately without thinking much.

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, in India, there are two major brands, Bajaj and Hero Honda, which specialize in the production of bicycles. Their equipment is equally good, so to convince

people

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to buy a

product

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that drives sales, they promote it. Thereby,

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advertising is a vital element

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selling goods

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, I agree that advertising is not the scorer.

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, for essential goods

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as gasoline, there is no need to advertise. Since

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is a very necessary source of energy for transportation, there is no need to advertise.

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, the

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should not be advertised indiscriminately so that

people

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can misunderstand. Only focus ads on essential items that benefit users.

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, restaurants in a small area may not need to advertise to locals as they can simply search on Google Maps and find the restaurants themselves. To draw a conclusion, no matter how good the described advantages of the

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are or if it meets

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's needs,

people

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will buy it. I think there are more approaches for consumers to know about the

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through advertising

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If a product is good or it meets people's needs,people will buy it. So advertising is unnecessary and no more entertainment. Agree or disagree

Your opinion

The most important element in a person’s life is their work. Without a satisfying career, life is meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think it is more important to spead money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems such as rrailways and trams. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

some expert believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than at secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Large-scale festival attend tourists, bring economic benefits to an area, while taking away the local culture discuss the advantages and disadvantages.