The chart below show the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below show the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph shows the trends of several kinds of crimes in New Port city centre from the year 2003 to 2012.
Overall
, the chart lays off different types of unlawful acts that fall in number as time goes by. To start with, from 2003 to 2005, the number of caught burglars is the highest,
ranged
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from about 3,000 to 3,600 incidents, followed by automotive
stealer
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stealers
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, and
robber
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robbers
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.
In addition
, stealing straight from people was always the least occurred atrocity in New Port.
Moreover
, in the year 2004 to 2008, the action of stealing from houses decreased significantly from about 3,600 to just about 1,300 incidents,
in contrast
to vehicle looting and face-to-face mugging that remained constant throughout the
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counted about 2,500 and a little bit over 500, respectively.
This
trend causes a crossing point between
car
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the car
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theft line and
burglary
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the burglary
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line,
hence
making automobile stealing the most common evil action
in
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the end of 2012.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • changes
  • took place
  • three different areas of crime
  • New Port city center
  • from 2003 to 2012
  • summarise
  • information
  • selecting
  • reporting
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • where relevant
  • overall
  • crime rates
  • downward trend
  • most significant drop
  • observed
  • theft
  • burglary
  • on the other hand
  • slight increase
  • drug-related offenses
  • same period
  • declined steadily
  • significant decrease
  • 10-year period
  • in contrast
  • slight decline
  • remaining years
  • violent crimes
  • relatively stable
  • slight fluctuation
  • conclusion
  • recorded
  • small increase
  • initially
  • then declined slightly
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