The line graph differs the amount of nitrogen oxide by four types of vehicles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant
The line graph illustrates the
different
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differences
of
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in
nitrogen
oxide Use synonyms
in
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apply
emission
from four Use synonyms
type
of transportation.
Change to a plural noun
types
Overall
, the Linking Words
buses
had the highest amount of Use synonyms
nitrogen
which harmed mostly Use synonyms
to
the environment ,the lowest are from the diesel Change preposition
apply
cars
so those could be the most eco-friendly. Public Use synonyms
buses
and petrol Use synonyms
cars
experienced an upward trend; lorries and diesel Use synonyms
cars
witnessed the opposite trend.
First,diesel Use synonyms
cars
emitted a Use synonyms
nitrogen
oxide level at about 7g/Use synonyms
km
at 10kph and the figure slowly declined as the car got faster, until Use synonyms
of
5g/Change preposition
apply
km
at 70kph to 130kph. The Use synonyms
emission
of petrol Use synonyms
cars
remained Use synonyms
stabilizing
around 10g/Change the verb form
to stabilize
km
across 110kph, Use synonyms
with
the except for 120kph and 130kph, at which Change preposition
apply
leveled
up to over 11g/Change the spelling
levelled
km
and 12g/Use synonyms
km
respectively.
Use synonyms
Secondly
, Linking Words
buses
and lorries dismissed significantly more Use synonyms
nitrogen
oxide, Use synonyms
although
both Linking Words
type
of transportation have Change to a plural noun
types
decreases
. Specifically, the Change the verb form
decreased
emission
figure of Use synonyms
buses
started high at 40g/Use synonyms
km
at 10kph, which Use synonyms
then
decreased sharply to 25g/Linking Words
km
at 60kph before recovering and breaking its previous peak with about 42g/Use synonyms
km
at 130kph. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, lorries’ Linking Words
Use synonyms
emission
started at 33g/Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
km
at the lowest speed before Use synonyms
got
Wrong verb form
getting
at
the bottom at about 17g/Change preposition
to
km
at 90kph and got back steadily to 25g/Use synonyms
km
at the highest speed.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words nitrogen, emission, buses, cars, g, km, kph with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreases" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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