Wealthy countries often provide the financial aid to help poorer region. Some people claim that it is a generate active and will truly solve some tricky problems while others argue that this policy does not have the long-term effect and need to try another type of support. I personally agree with the later one and I will outline the reasons in the following essays.

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with, impoverished

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can utilize

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money

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to finish dozens of works which makes society more convenient.

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,building the infrastructure and transportation is the most crucial.

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of going to school or company on foot or by bicycle,

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modern technology is more efficient and can avoid wasting

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time.

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, the active can attract the global company to invest

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which can produce more opportunities for local

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.

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teenagers can get the

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subsidy to pursue their dream. As they succeed, they can give back to society to cause a cycle.

On the other hand

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, some people argue that

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financial aid is just a short-term way to solve the problems, the alternative forms of

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should be implemented. It can cause serious

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when the

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is misused by the government and some even take

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advantage of that

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for their own sake

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those in need can just get a little part of the

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.

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, educational systems are the main priority we need to truly focus on, with the

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of knowledge, they

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just do the low-paid job and don't know how to use the

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properly. Other fields

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training and scientific research are

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vital.

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believe that

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of donating

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undeveloped countries only, improving educational systems and other fields must be taken into account for long-term goals.