Wealthy countries often provide the financial aid to help poorer region. Some people claim that it is a generate active and will truly solve some tricky problems while others argue that this policy does not have the long-term effect and need to try another type of support. I personally agree with the later one and I will outline the reasons in the following essays.

To begin

with, impoverished

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can utilize

this

money

to finish dozens of works which makes society more convenient.

Firstly

,building the infrastructure and transportation is the most crucial.

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of going to school or company on foot or by bicycle,

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modern technology is more efficient and can avoid wasting

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time.

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, the active can attract the global company to invest

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which can produce more opportunities for local

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.

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,

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teenagers can get the

money

subsidy to pursue their dream. As they succeed, they can give back to society to cause a cycle.

On the other hand

, some people argue that

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financial aid is just a short-term way to solve the problems, the alternative forms of

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should be implemented. It can cause serious

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when the

money

is misused by the government and some even take

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advantage of that

money

for their own sake

while

those in need can just get a little part of the

money

.

Additionally

, educational systems are the main priority we need to truly focus on, with the

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of knowledge, they

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just do the low-paid job and don't know how to use the

money

properly. Other fields

such

as

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training and scientific research are

also

vital.

To sum up

, I

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believe that

instead

of donating

money

to

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undeveloped countries only, improving educational systems and other fields must be taken into account for long-term goals.