The chart below show the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below show the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates differences in the number of crimes that took place in New Port between 2003 and 2012.
Overall
, at the beginning of the period, most of the crimes were burglaries but ,
at the end
of the duration, Car theft became the most popular form of crime. Over the period, robbery remained the least used form of misdemeanour. In 2003, there were nearly 3500 burglaries.
This
type of crime reached its peak in the middle of 2004 and
then
, it start declining . It declined from the middle of 2004 until the middle of 2008, from over 3500 cases to only a bit over 1000.
Furthermore
,
this
statistic remained constant until 2012.
Also
,
this
sum became equal to the statistic of Car theft at the beginning of 2007.
Nevertheless
, the number of Car theft had little variation, remaining between 2000 and 3000 cases from 2003 to 2012. The category with the lowest rate remained Robbery , keeping
this
number ,throughout the whole period, around 500 incidents .
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • changes
  • took place
  • three different areas of crime
  • New Port city center
  • from 2003 to 2012
  • summarise
  • information
  • selecting
  • reporting
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • where relevant
  • overall
  • crime rates
  • downward trend
  • most significant drop
  • observed
  • theft
  • burglary
  • on the other hand
  • slight increase
  • drug-related offenses
  • same period
  • declined steadily
  • significant decrease
  • 10-year period
  • in contrast
  • slight decline
  • remaining years
  • violent crimes
  • relatively stable
  • slight fluctuation
  • conclusion
  • recorded
  • small increase
  • initially
  • then declined slightly
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