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if people go to live in another country, they should follow the local customs and traditions. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays it has been in trend to move abroad for permanent residence and adobe foreign living standards. There is nothing bad about it because every individual has a right to spend their life
according to
 their own taste, but I am unconvinced of these people's artificial approach . To begin with, the world has been modernized and civilised day by day and all civilisations are valuable and respected,
moreover
, humanity is being introduced by many other
ethnologies
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technologies
 and folkways.
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 all societies have set specific levels for good living.It led the people to follow different traditions for getting a lavish and fancy living style. it is indeed right when other cultures are promoted by the second citizens ,it causes a high level of depression
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 because it's not easy for everyone to compete in the challenging community.
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, recently research has been conducted in U.k on multiple cultures.
according to
this
 ,research the population who follows their ground
instead
 of other ethnicity is more confident and challenging.
overall
, I disagree with
this
 statement that people should apply other cultures and their outfits on themselves.,
Furthermore
 many religions live in a single territory , so when others carry local trends and dresses it means they will cross their religious limits , which does not leave a good impact on other followers. In a nutshell,shell they have to own their identity because originality is power.
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