The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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These two given maps illustrate the location of different Lynwich

campus's

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campus

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sections in 2006

beside

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besides

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their present layouts.

Overall

, Lynwich

college

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College

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has been

dramatic

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through dramatic

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transformations throughout

this

mentioned time.

Whereas

it has lost a considerable amount of its green places

along with

a lot of trees, some new man-made constructions have been added to

this

site and the transportation system

also

have

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has

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been expanded. At first glance,

it is clear that

some new buildings have been built in

this

region

such

new

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a new

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cafeteria that has been constructed in the central part of

this

area and

new

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a new

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bus stop

that is

located to the south of

main

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the main

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road.

Moreover

, some places

such

library

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the library

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has

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have

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been moved to the southeastern part of

college

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the college

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location and the old building of

library

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the library

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along with

a small part of

former

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the former

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sports field has been transformed into

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a sport

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sport

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sports

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center

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centre

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and

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apply

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for achieving

this

purpose, building a sports

center

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centre

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sport

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sports

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fields that were located below the old library building has been shrunk.

Additionally

, the former car park has been shrunk as well for installing

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apply

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bike storage for students' and teachers' bicycles.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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3 paragraphs

187 words

6.00

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Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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Topic Vocabulary:

underwent significant changes
consisted of
large open space
utilized
relocated
limited facilities and amenities
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