Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always the same opinions as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 1-Same opinion a. Happiness b. No Conflict 2- Disagree a. Improvement b. Different opinion, tolerance c. Different viewpoint

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, have a higher tolerance and build new viewpoints. For
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if you are in an ambient in which you have to defend
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because to defend yourself you should understand what others are saying.
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