The chart below show the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below show the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Overall
, the pie chart illustrates the demographic of Australian
school
graduates in which field would they pursue after leaving secondary
school
in the years 1980 1990 and 2000. In 1980 50% of
school
lever had decided to pursue
further
education which surprisingly dropped to 38% after a decade in 1990 followed by an unnoticeable change in a similar segment in 2000 where the unemployment rate was quite low. In the comparison of employment. students received after secondary
school
.
Secondly
, Employment went to 40% of 50% in 9090.
However
, a slight change occurred in unemployed students at 10 to 12% minor changes in 1990 which
also
dropped to 8% after a decade. Employment increased in 2000 because of a gradual change in future education demand.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • changes
  • took place
  • three different areas of crime
  • New Port city center
  • from 2003 to 2012
  • summarise
  • information
  • selecting
  • reporting
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • where relevant
  • overall
  • crime rates
  • downward trend
  • most significant drop
  • observed
  • theft
  • burglary
  • on the other hand
  • slight increase
  • drug-related offenses
  • same period
  • declined steadily
  • significant decrease
  • 10-year period
  • in contrast
  • slight decline
  • remaining years
  • violent crimes
  • relatively stable
  • slight fluctuation
  • conclusion
  • recorded
  • small increase
  • initially
  • then declined slightly
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