Adult youths are often called up for working development of communities. Some people say that they should be paid other say that they should not be pair. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Public
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The public
are
divided on the issue of whether the youngster of today should be paid in term of communal production or whether others believe that they should do Change the verb form
is
these
work without taking any remuneration. Correct determiner usage
this
This
statement has a figure of benefits along with
drawbacks, I personally side with the latter view.
The main reason why a sum of people say that they should be paid is that young
generation Correct article usage
the young
need
an amount to full fill their desires. If the author of these social Change the verb form
needs
group
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groups
pay
them for their deeds, they will get Change the verb form
pays
opportunity
to complete their demands. Add an article
the opportunity
an opportunity
Furthermore
, the percentage of unemployment will be reduced. For example
, it is seen that in our country, numerous graduates don't get job
. Add an article
a job
the job
By providing
wages, Change preposition
Providing
these task
will attract their mind, and they will tend to do that task Change the determiner
this task
these tasks
Additionally
, it will bring a paramount impact not only our
social life Change preposition
on our
on the contrary
also
make
a country strong Wrong verb form
making
by
financially. Change preposition
apply
Apart from
this
, from
a recent Change preposition
apply
study
it is demonstrated that, Add a comma
,study
public
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the public
a public
who
can’t fill up their dreams Correct pronoun usage
apply
due to
lack
of abundance money. They are willing Correct article usage
a lack
themselves
to do crimes, which is bringing an adverse development. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Hence
, they should be paid.
On the other hand
, people who stand against payment
system, Correct article usage
the payment
they
Correct pronoun usage
apply
also
have a statistic of valid reasons. They think, by doing civil
job they can enhance their skills like communication Add an article
the civil
a civil
skill
, Fix the agreement mistake
skills
leadership
Correct word choice
and leadership
skill
and, even can make their resume heavy. Fix the agreement mistake
skills
Moreover
, the young nation who's
main intention is to be a doctor, nurse or other business which are related to the civil service. Correct your spelling
whose
These
Correct determiner usage
This
voluntarily
work will play like Change the adverb
voluntary
internship
.
In conclusion, if they get payment to do Add an article
an internship
job
, Add an article
the job
a job
this
will inspired
them or make them productive to serve the nation. Both views have various Change the verb form
inspire
perspective
, Fix the agreement mistake
perspectives
however
the figure of disadvantages is less than advantages.Add a comma
,however
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