Adult youths are often called up for working development of communities. Some people say that they should be paid other say that they should not be pair. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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divided on the issue of whether the youngster of today should be paid in term of communal production or whether others believe that they should do
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work without taking any remuneration.
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statement has a figure of benefits
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drawbacks, I personally side with the latter view. The main reason why a sum of people say that they should be paid is that
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generation
need
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an amount to full fill their desires. If the author of these social
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pay
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them for their deeds, they will get
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the opportunity
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to complete their demands.
Furthermore
, the percentage of unemployment will be reduced.
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, it is seen that in our country, numerous graduates don't get
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a job
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.
By providing
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wages,
these task
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will attract their mind, and they will tend to do that task
Additionally
, it will bring a paramount impact not only
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social life
on the contrary
also
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a country strong
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financially.
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,
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a recent
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it is demonstrated that,
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the public
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can’t fill up their dreams
due to
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of abundance money. They are willing
themselves
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to do crimes, which is bringing an adverse development.
Hence
, they should be paid.
On the other hand
, people who stand against
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system,
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apply
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also
have a statistic of valid reasons. They think, by doing
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job they can enhance their skills like communication
skill
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skills
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,
leadership
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and leadership
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skill
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and, even can make their resume heavy.
Moreover
, the young nation
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main intention is to be a doctor, nurse or other business which are related to the civil service.
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voluntarily
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work will play like
internship
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an internship
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. In conclusion, if they get payment to do
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the job
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,
this
will
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them or make them productive to serve the nation. Both views have various
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,
however
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the figure of disadvantages is less than advantages.
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