The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
The table and chart illustrate data about police
finanacial
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financial
plan
during Fix the agreement mistake
plans
two
consequence years
(2017, 2018) in one region in Britain. The table displays information about financial sources
whereas
charts give information about allocations by sphere.
Overall
, more than half of the budget came from National Governement
during that period another Correct your spelling
government
part
of it built
by local taxes mainly and from other Add a missing verb
was built
sources
a small part
of it. Exploring the distribution of finances its
obvious that about Replace the word
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three-fourth
of them were shared for salaries in mentioned Correct your spelling
three-fourths
two
years
. Infrastructure expenses remained the same while
technology funding has increased nearl
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nearly
two
-fold.
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, from Add an article
the table
a table
table
we can see that police annual finances in 2017 and 2018 mainly came from Add a comma
,table
National
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the National
governement
and local taxes Correct your spelling
government
while
only smallest
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the smallest
part
only from other sources
. National Governement
allocations were 175,5 and 177,8 Correct your spelling
government
millions
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million
of
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apply
pound
respectively during above mentioned Fix the agreement mistake
pounds
two
years
whereas
income from local taxes rose about 10 percent
.
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per cent
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, from displayed
chart is evident that about three-fouth Add an article
the displayed
a displayed
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of finances
were spent Correct article usage
the finances
for
salaries with Change preposition
on
slightly
decreased in 2018. Correct article usage
a slightly
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for
infrastructure allocated the same amount of Change preposition
apply
sources
in two
consequent years
while
technology funding rose by 6 percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
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