The chart below show the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below show the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
provided chart illustrates three different types of offences which occurred in New port city, over a period of 9 years, and
also
it explains the
rate
of changes in these crimes.
Overall
, it can be seen that the
rate
of
burglary
occurrence started more than car theft, but the end was the opposite.
To begin
, in 2003,
burglary
happened, about 3450
times
which was considered the highest
rate
of crime compared to others in the same year. Even though there was a slight increase in
burglary
that reached to peak, in 2004, to be greater than 3500
times
, it dropped dramatically to around 1200
times
, in 2008.
In addition
to that, in 2003, car theft occurrence was lower than
burglary
, at about 2600
times
, and it declined in the mid of 2006 to about 2100
times
, after ,that it remained constant until it intersected with
burglary
at the same point, about 2150
times
.
Moreover
,
although
robbery was initiated at a very low
rate
in comparison to others, at about 500
times
, it continued with very minimal change in its
rate
over the given period to stop at nearly the same
rate
that it began.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • changes
  • took place
  • three different areas of crime
  • New Port city center
  • from 2003 to 2012
  • summarise
  • information
  • selecting
  • reporting
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • where relevant
  • overall
  • crime rates
  • downward trend
  • most significant drop
  • observed
  • theft
  • burglary
  • on the other hand
  • slight increase
  • drug-related offenses
  • same period
  • declined steadily
  • significant decrease
  • 10-year period
  • in contrast
  • slight decline
  • remaining years
  • violent crimes
  • relatively stable
  • slight fluctuation
  • conclusion
  • recorded
  • small increase
  • initially
  • then declined slightly
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