The chart below show the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
provided chart illustrates three different types of offences which occurred in New port city, over a period of 9 years, and also
it explains the rate
of changes in these crimes. Overall
, it can be seen that the rate
of burglary
occurrence started more than car theft, but the end was the opposite.
To begin
, in 2003, burglary
happened, about 3450 times
which was considered the highest rate
of crime compared to others in the same year. Even though there was a slight increase in burglary
that reached to peak, in 2004, to be greater than 3500 times
, it dropped dramatically to around 1200 times
, in 2008.
In addition
to that, in 2003, car theft occurrence was lower than burglary
, at about 2600 times
, and it declined in the mid of 2006 to about 2100 times
, after ,that it remained constant until it intersected with burglary
at the same point, about 2150 times
.
Moreover
, although
robbery was initiated at a very low rate
in comparison to others, at about 500 times
, it continued with very minimal change in its rate
over the given period to stop at nearly the same rate
that it began.Submitted by sm710129 on
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