The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010.

The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010.
The graph explains how much the share price of Outokumpu cooperations varied in
euros
from January 2006 to December 2010. Generally speaking, what stands out is that the share price after experiencing some fluctuations approximately recovered to its first value. In 2006, the share price was around 13
euros
,
thereafter
it rose considerably to reach a peak of 32 in the middle of 2006.
However
,
this
amount decreases slightly to 22 a year after. After which the cost jumped to 30
euros
in 2008,
then
fell dramatically to 7
euros
during the next 6 months.
Moreover
, before facing an oscillation, the figure underwent a slow increase and reach 15
euros
in 2009. The figure,
finally
, was around 12
euros
in the
last
year of study.
On the other hand
, the youngest group started at 10% in 2000 and experienced some up-and-down until its final value which was 30% in 2011.
Although
those aged 25-35, started from 5% in 2000, and followed a similar trend until 2008, during the
last
3 years of study the fluctuation of
this
category was different from the previous one.
However
, like the 7–14-year people group, they reached the same final point.
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