The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The chart presents how often
people
in the USA consumed fast food
from restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
Generally, it is clear that
in 2013, the significant consumption fo
fast Correct your spelling
of
food
was once or twise
a month. Correct your spelling
twice
Minium
of eating fast Correct article usage
The minium
food
was just every day for the same year. In 2003 and 2006, people
often ate fast food
once a week. However
, everyday eaters were only the minimum ratio for all years.
In 2006 , people
who eaten
fast Wrong verb form
ate
food
once a week were nearly 30% higher than people
who were able to eat fast food
everyday
. Yet, in 2013, customers who were able to eat once a month were approximately 30 Replace the word
every day
persentage
higher than Correct your spelling
percentage
people
who were able to eat fast food
all days
. Fix the agreement mistake
day
Moreover
, customers who were able to eat fast food
a few times a year, that is
almost equel
Correct your spelling
equal
with
the ratio of 2006 and 2013.Change preposition
to
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