The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.
The bar graph illustrates the total
number
of minutes
measure
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measured
billions
of telephone calls in the united
Kingdom, in three kinds of Capitalize word
United
call
, over 7 years.
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calls
Overall
, it is clear that
calls by local -fixed line was
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were
highest
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the highest
numbe
in the UK during Correct your spelling
number
given
period , Add an article
a given
whereas
mobiles was
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were
least
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the least
number
. Furthermore
, calls by local -fixed
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local-fixed
was
increased over Unnecessary verb
apply
given
period but at certain years showed Add an article
the given
a given
decline
, Correct article usage
a decline
while
others
forms of Correct quantifier usage
other
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the call
call
showed raised .
Looking at Fix the agreement mistake
calls
bar
chart in more detail, In 1995 the local -fixed line was the highest Correct article usage
the bar
number
of foms
of Correct your spelling
forms
call
approximately 72 Correct subject-verb agreement
calls
minutes
( billions
) . In contrast
, mobiles was
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were
lowest
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the lowest
number
at around 3 72 minutes
( billions
).
In 1999, local -fixed
reached a peak at almost 90 Correct your spelling
local-fixed
minutes
( billions
) and after that
it showed Add a comma
,that
decreased
and in 2002 at Replace the word
decrease
lowed
point at around 72 Add an article
the lowed
a lowed
minutes
( billions
). In comparison, 2002
both national and international -fixed line and Change preposition
in 2002
moblies
at their highest point at 60 and 46 Correct your spelling
mobiles
mobile
movies
minutes
( billions
), respectively.Submitted by faiz3177 on
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