Topic: Some people think that too much money has been spent looking after and repairing old buildings, so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In general, urban development is one of the popular issues in a place. Some citizens believe that spending too much financial
resources
looking after and repairing old Use synonyms
buildings
is not suitable, and knocking down old Use synonyms
buildings
and building modern Use synonyms
ones
Use synonyms
instead
would be better. In my opinion, I partly agree with that.
First of all, looking after and repairing old Linking Words
buildings
needs too Use synonyms
much
financial Change the quantifier
many
resources
which Use synonyms
is
not Change the verb form
are
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cost effective
. Repairing historical Add a hyphen
cost-effective
buildings
is a Use synonyms
high
Add a hyphen
high-cost
cost
project, especially Use synonyms
to repair
Change the verb form
repairing
the
Correct article usage
apply
buildings
in the urban city. It requires a high safety quality during construction, including Use synonyms
to maintain
the main Change the verb form
maintaining
construct
. Repairing old Replace the word
construction
buildings
usually needs a professor group to plan the whole looking after and repairing proposal. Looking after and repairing old Use synonyms
buildings
is a higher Use synonyms
cost
than constructing a new modern building. Use synonyms
Hence
, knocking down old Linking Words
buildings
and building modern Use synonyms
ones
Use synonyms
instead
is Linking Words
Use synonyms
cost effective
.
Add a hyphen
cost-effective
Moreover
, knocking down old Linking Words
buildings
and building modern Use synonyms
ones
Use synonyms
instead
would be helpful to Linking Words
society
development. Most old Change noun form
society's
buildings
have 5-10 floors only, and can not accommodate so many people. These are not using the Use synonyms
land-value
effectively. If they remove the old Correct your spelling
land value
buildings
Use synonyms
,
and build modern skyscrapers. Which can use the Remove the comma
apply
urban-land
more as well and effectively. The government Correct your spelling
urban land
also
can resolve the housing problem in Linking Words
this
case. Linking Words
Hence
, knocking down old Linking Words
buildings
and building modern Use synonyms
ones
Use synonyms
instead
is using land-resource productively.
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However
, some voices argue that those old Linking Words
buildings
are cultural heritage, and should be protected and repaired. Use synonyms
For instance
, a lot of Linking Words
British style
’ Add a hyphen
British-style
building
Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
in
Hong Kong Island were repaired and protected as well. Even Change preposition
on
those
Correct determiner usage
apply
of
the historical Change preposition
apply
buildings
located in the CBD, Use synonyms
which
will not affect the economic development. In fact, Hong Kong has to evaluate them, they prefer to repair and protect the high Correct pronoun usage
apply
historica-value
Correct your spelling
historical-value
historic-value
buildings
. If the government repaired all of the old Use synonyms
buildings
, it would waste lots of financial Use synonyms
resources
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, a number of rich historical-value Linking Words
buildings
should be repaired and protected.
In conclusion, some of the old Use synonyms
buildings
should be repaired and protected Use synonyms
according to
their Linking Words
historical-value
. At the same time, the government should spend the financial Correct your spelling
historical value
resources
and land Use synonyms
resources
effectively.Use synonyms
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