Topic: Some people think that too much money has been spent looking after and repairing old buildings, so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In general, urban development is one of the popular issues in a place. Some citizens believe that spending too much financial
resources
looking after and repairing old
buildings
is not suitable, and knocking down old
buildings
and building modern
ones
instead
would be better. In my opinion, I partly agree with that. First of all, looking after and repairing old
buildings
needs too
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financial
resources
which
is
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not
cost effective
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. Repairing historical
buildings
is a
high
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cost
project, especially
to repair
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the
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buildings
in the urban city. It requires a high safety quality during construction, including
to maintain
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the main
construct
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. Repairing old
buildings
usually needs a professor group to plan the whole looking after and repairing proposal. Looking after and repairing old
buildings
is a higher
cost
than constructing a new modern building.
Hence
, knocking down old
buildings
and building modern
ones
instead
is
cost effective
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.
Moreover
, knocking down old
buildings
and building modern
ones
instead
would be helpful to
society
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development. Most old
buildings
have 5-10 floors only, and can not accommodate so many people. These are not using the
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effectively. If they remove the old
buildings
,
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and build modern skyscrapers. Which can use the
urban-land
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urban land
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more as well and effectively. The government
also
can resolve the housing problem in
this
case.
Hence
, knocking down old
buildings
and building modern
ones
instead
is using land-resource productively.
However
, some voices argue that those old
buildings
are cultural heritage, and should be protected and repaired.
For instance
, a lot of
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building
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in
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Hong Kong Island were repaired and protected as well. Even
those
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of
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the historical
buildings
located in the CBD,
which
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will not affect the economic development. In fact, Hong Kong has to evaluate them, they prefer to repair and protect the high
historica-value
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historical-value
historic-value
buildings
. If the government repaired all of the old
buildings
, it would waste lots of financial
resources
.
Therefore
, a number of rich historical-value
buildings
should be repaired and protected. In conclusion, some of the old
buildings
should be repaired and protected
according to
their
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. At the same time, the government should spend the financial
resources
and land
resources
effectively.
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