The chart below shows the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.
The chart graph shows the statistics of
magazines
sold per person
in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with expected sales for 2007.
Overall
, it is clear that
Country
A and Country
B have a higher number of magazines
sold per person
than other
three countries between 2003 and 2007. Correct article usage
the other
Besides
, Country
E has the lowest number of sold magazines
by people in 3 period years.
It is also
evident that there has been a dipped trend of magazines
sold per person
in Country
A, B and C, and expected to keep declining in the future. Fix the agreement mistake
Countries
However
, the number of magazines
sold per person
in Country
D is increasing steadily, which projected a rising rate in 2007. It has a different trend with Country
A, B and C.
Fix the agreement mistake
Countries
Finally
, in country
E, the statistics are not steady over the 3 year
period. Even though it rose from around 4 in 2003 to around 6 in 2005, it is projected to go back down in 2007 Add a hyphen
3-year
around
4.Change preposition
to around
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words magazines, person, country with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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