The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three counties.

The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three counties.
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The charts provide information on how the Republic of Korea,
Sweden
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and the
UK
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are dealing with hazardous materials.
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, all countries except Korea mostly treated hazardous wastes by burying them underground. Looking at the charts, burial is a popular method for treating waste in the
UK
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and
Sweden
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, with 82% and 55% respectively. Meanwhile, only 22% of them were buried by the Koreans, which is the smallest among the groups.
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, incineration was
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used by all countries, with
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being the highest user at 20%,
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their counterparts only had less than 10%.
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, recycling is the preferred approach in Korea, at 69%,
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only a quarter of them are recycled in
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.
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,
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method was not an option in the
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.
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,
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people had other ways of eliminating
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kind of rubbish. Less than one in ten were treated with chemicals, which is a process that you do not see in the other counterparts. The remaining percentage, which is 8% is dumping dangerous materials into the sea.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sweden, uk with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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