You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
This
bar graph illustrates, by three teams, the scores
between in
2002 and 2005. Change preposition
apply
Overall
, team
B
remained at a higher score throughout the whole Ike frame.
At the beginning of the period, the scores
of team
B
spiked to 82pt, while
team
A and team
C had less than 10pt. In 2003, Team
B
decreased by 22pt, but team
A and C increased slightly to 11pt and 15pt, respectively.
Moving on in 2004, Fix the agreement mistake
teams
although
team
A experienced a significant soaring
at 35pt, the Replace the word
soar
scores
of team
B
was higher than others, despite dipping at
43pt and the lowest over the period. Change preposition
to
On the other hand
, the scores
of team
C decreased to 3pt. At the end
of the period, the scores
of team
B
depicted a
Change the article
an
increasing
to 55pt, Replace the word
increase
in contrast
, team
B
dropped at
8pt. Change preposition
to
Furthermore
, team
B
fell from just over half to only 5pt.Submitted by songcheng619 on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words scores, team, b, pt with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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