You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
This
bar graph illustrates, by three teams, the Linking Words
scores
between Use synonyms
in
2002 and 2005. Change preposition
apply
Overall
, Linking Words
team
Use synonyms
B
remained at a higher score throughout the whole Ike frame.
At the beginning of the period, the Use synonyms
scores
of Use synonyms
team
Use synonyms
B
spiked to 82pt, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
team
A and Use synonyms
team
C had less than 10pt. In 2003, Use synonyms
Team
Use synonyms
B
decreased by 22pt, but Use synonyms
Use synonyms
team
A and C increased slightly to 11pt and 15pt, respectively.
Moving on in 2004, Fix the agreement mistake
teams
although
Linking Words
team
A experienced a significant Use synonyms
soaring
at 35pt, the Replace the word
soar
scores
of Use synonyms
team
Use synonyms
B
was higher than others, despite dipping Use synonyms
at
43pt and the lowest over the period. Change preposition
to
On the other hand
, the Linking Words
scores
of Use synonyms
team
C decreased to 3pt. Use synonyms
At the end
of the period, the Linking Words
scores
of Use synonyms
team
Use synonyms
B
depicted Use synonyms
a
Change the article
an
increasing
to 55pt, Replace the word
increase
in contrast
, Linking Words
team
Use synonyms
B
dropped Use synonyms
at
8pt. Change preposition
to
Furthermore
, Linking Words
team
Use synonyms
B
fell from just over half to only 5pt.Use synonyms
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words scores, team, b, pt with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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