The graph shows the export of thousand of cars in Uzbekistan between 2014 and 2019.

The  graph shows the export of thousand of cars in  Uzbekistan  between 2014 and 2019.
The bar chart illustrates the data about the
export
of the number of cars in one country during a five-year period from 2014 to 2018.
Overall
, there were many significant changes during the period.
While
the number of
export
of thousands of
car
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in A fluctuated wildly, B increased dramatically in that from 2014 to 2018. It can be clearly observed from the chart that the
export
of A started at
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200
million
in the first year, and
then
decreased by 50
million
in 2015. After that, it dramatically increased to 275
million
in 2016 and there was
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slightly
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decline of 100
million
in 2017 before reaching
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its peak of 300
million
in the
export
of thousands of
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in the final year. In terms of
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, the number of the
export
in B was more than that of A 25
million
at the beginning, and had an upward trend between 2014 and 2018 from 225
million
in 2014 to 325
million
at the end
of the period.
However
, there was a
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decrease to 200
million
in 2016.
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