The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
The data illustrate how the content of consumption every week from families in one country change in 1968 and in 2018.
Primarily, the numbers of housing, transport and
leisure
increased, Use synonyms
while
other dropped except the figure of household Linking Words
keep
stable, at 8. Change the verb form
keeps
Also
, the percentage of food was the highest in 1968, before it dropped to 17 in 2018. Linking Words
By contrast
, the proportion of Linking Words
leisure
dramatically climbed from 9 to 23 during the five decades and became the main cost in 2018. Meanwhile, the numbers of fuel and power and personal goods were the least(9), Use synonyms
four fold
as less as that of Correct your spelling
fourfold
leisure
. At the same time, the proportion of housing and transport rose twofold from 1968 to 2018.
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Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the percentage of food was the highest in 1968, Linking Words
while
that of Linking Words
leisure
was the biggest in 2018. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the figure Linking Words
of
household goods remained stable.Change preposition
for
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