Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

In recent centuries, the light on medical development
had
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brought us plenty of
benefits
in
life
. The question of whether experiments on
animals
for medical truly
is
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right.
While
some argue
that is
a bad working. In my opinion, I can only agree with a part issue and
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essay will explore more about the above problems.
First,
we will discuss morale in society. There are various problems to talk about on the moral side. But standing in the people’s protecting animal perspective that truly is a wrong working. In spite of there being so many
benefits
that have been given to our
life
.
However
, some cases which take too effective on
animals
’ health like gene mutations or some accidents can
be have brought
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diseases to humans from experiment rooms.
This
can be seen in some countries that have medical growth, at there always
have
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a lot of protecting animal
Non-Government-Organizations
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which help to push the
benefits
of
animals
getting safe. Through it
makes
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the citizens' protection awareness becomes high with
animals
.
Second,
we will talk about the
benefits
it has brought to humans. In fact, animal experiments have truly a low rate in the world which we compare with killing, eating… Standing in the human perspective, I think experiments on
animals
are extremely necessary in
this
century.
This
leads to the development of medicines which helps human avoid disease in their
life
and plenty of disease-gain vaccines which can make them across the disease.
For example
in
life
, some lands in the world have medical progress that creates a lot of vaccines for humans which help people against all diseases like vaccine against HIV, Vaccine cancer against Lung... In conclusions.
Besides
animal experiment is wrong but it has brought plenty of
benefits
for human.
this
problem lies in the awareness of each individual in perspective of them
also
. That goes hand in hand,
the
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government should take to some policies which help to protect
animals
and create a
life
better and better.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Ethics
  • Morality
  • Vivisection
  • In vivo testing
  • Cruelty-free
  • Animal welfare
  • Biomedical research
  • Toxicology
  • Sentience
  • Compassionate
  • Humane
  • Speciesism
  • In vitro
  • Alternative methods
  • Pharmacology
  • Clinical trials
  • Bioethics
  • Animal rights
  • Pain threshold
  • Efficacy
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