The exploration of other planets has been increasing with
growing
technology. Correct article usage
the growing
According to
some communities, we should spend more money on research on planets like Mars. In my view, we should spend more Linking Words
expenditures
on our existing planet would be better, so I disagree with the above statement.
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firstly
, we are living on the globe Fix capitalization
Firstly
and
our first priority should be to make our world better by providing basic facilities around the globe. Punctuation problem
, and
Such
as education, electricity, food, water and many Linking Words
necessary
facilities. As several populations are dying because of the unavailability of these things, Correct word choice
other necessary
so
the government need to spend more money on basic survival things rather than doing research.
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Secondly
, we should have to empathise Linking Words
for
more research on Change preposition
with
earth
to make it Fix capitalization
Earth
further
fascinating. As I believe, the surface is Linking Words
enough
beautiful place to live in compared to others because it provides us with all the important stuff. Correct determiner usage
a
Moreover
, it would not be a good idea to ignore the community of Linking Words
this
area and Linking Words
make
our time waste on living on other planets. Verb problem
waste
if
we Fix capitalization
If
will
make Verb problem
apply
this
place better by giving all the required stuff to common people, we don't need to live on another planet. Linking Words
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, more observation is required about global warming to make our surroundings better. Linking Words
it
controls the temperature of the Fix capitalization
It
earth
.
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Earth
in Conclusion
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In conclusion
while
some human beings believe that spending more resources on other globalLinking Words
, I
too think providing main facilities to the common nation and doing more experiments Check wording
issues, I
on
our existing place would make it better for all species.Change preposition
in