The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
bar chart provides information about the percentage
of people
who were born in Australia
and outside Australia
living in urban, town and rural in 1995 and 2010. Units are given in percentage
.
Overall
, who
Correct pronoun usage
those who
are
living in Unnecessary verb
apply
cities
between
born in Change preposition
apply
Australia
and outside Australia
has the highest percentage
through
1995 to 2010, Change preposition
from
while
living
in towns and rural Correct pronoun usage
those living
areas'
statistics are fluctuating Change noun form
areas
through
the year.
As can be seen from the chart in detail, in 1995, Change preposition
over
people
who are living in cities
and who were born in Australia
and outside Australia
figured out nearly over than
50% and reached the highest number. Change preposition
apply
However
, people
who reside in towns have the lowest percentage
, at least under 20%, which figured doubled down than cities
' percentage
.
In 2010, people
who are living in cities
and who were born in Australia
and outside Australia
also
figured out the highest percentage
and numbers are grown
up, nearly over Change the form of the verb
growing
than
60%. Change preposition
apply
Whereas
, the towns and rural areas'
Change noun form
areas
people
's percentages have declined than before, which reached less then
20%.Replace the word
than
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