The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
This
bar chart provides information about the Linking Words
percentage
of Use synonyms
people
who were born in Use synonyms
Australia
and outside Use synonyms
Australia
living in urban, town and rural in 1995 and 2010. Units are given in Use synonyms
percentage
.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
who
Correct pronoun usage
those who
are
living in Unnecessary verb
apply
cities
Use synonyms
between
born in Change preposition
apply
Australia
and outside Use synonyms
Australia
has the highest Use synonyms
percentage
Use synonyms
through
1995 to 2010, Change preposition
from
while
Linking Words
living
in towns and rural Correct pronoun usage
those living
areas'
statistics are fluctuating Change noun form
areas
through
the year.
As can be seen from the chart in detail, in 1995, Change preposition
over
people
who are living in Use synonyms
cities
and who were born in Use synonyms
Australia
and outside Use synonyms
Australia
figured out nearly over Use synonyms
than
50% and reached the highest number. Change preposition
apply
However
, Linking Words
people
who reside in towns have the lowest Use synonyms
percentage
, at least under 20%, which figured doubled down than Use synonyms
cities
' Use synonyms
percentage
.
In 2010, Use synonyms
people
who are living in Use synonyms
cities
and who were born in Use synonyms
Australia
and outside Use synonyms
Australia
Use synonyms
also
figured out the highest Linking Words
percentage
and numbers are Use synonyms
grown
up, nearly over Change the form of the verb
growing
than
60%. Change preposition
apply
Whereas
, the towns and rural Linking Words
areas'
Change noun form
areas
people
's percentages have declined than before, which reached less Use synonyms
Linking Words
then
20%.Replace the word
than
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