Advanced technology has brought many beneficial changes to the world. However, some old people today struggle with the use of technologies such as mobile phones and the Internet. How can the elderly benefit from using advanced technologies? How can the elderly be encouraged to use consumer electronics more often?

This

rapid pace of

technology

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innovation has undeniably

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yielded

benefits to all around the world. The problem is, still

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certain groups of

elders

are struggling with the integration of these advancements into

thier

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their

daily lives. From my perspective, the utilization of these innovations

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elders

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elders'

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social engagements,

although

, the community

centers

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can

held

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free

luctures

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lectures

to enhance the frequency of

elders

using the technology. Technologies can benefit the elderly

of

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their

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social

engagement,

in other words

, the convenience that technologies bring robust connection with

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society.

For example

,

elders

are obviously not as energetic as teens, which means the information

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activities that they are interested in

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been limited. So

therfore

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therefore

, even though

elders

are not comfortable to

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search

such

occasions to join by visiting door-by-door, they are able to dig information through

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technology.

Consequently

, the rate of social engagement will not be affected even if the age increase.

On the other hand

, community

centers

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can stimulate the frequency of

elders

using consumer electronics by providing free lectures.

For example

, in Taipei City, a group of teenagers volunteers to teach

olders

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holders

older

to use these items for free.

This

motivation is in order to prompt

elders

get

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familiar with

such

intelligence proactively. By providing

such

beneficial classes,

elders

got more used to consumer electronics and soon discover its convenience. Principally, the core between free lectures and encouragement is that the activity is

ccomplimentary

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complementary

and

also

able to socialize. Learning profitable methods for free and

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their friendzone

simutaneously

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simultaneously

,

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totally “kill two birds with one stone”. In conclusion, technologies can benefit

elders

of

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in

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their social engagement,

besides

, community

centers

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centres

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are able to encourage the elderly to use consumer electronics more occasionally.

Elders

will benefit from

this

high-tech equipment once they get

along with

it.