Some people think that governments should pay for health care and education, but others believe it is not government’s responsibility. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
Having the accessibility of basic
human-needs
is everyone's right. Correct your spelling
human needs
While
some people
believe medical and educational services need to be funded by the government, others opine it is not necessarily required. I agree with the former point of view because availability
of Add an article
the availability
such
free services can undoubtedly enhance the quality-of-life
of citizens.
On the one hand, those Correct your spelling
quality of life
who
Change the pronoun
whom
asset
that the government is not Correct your spelling
assert
obligatory
to bear the cost of health care and education may believe that it is a self-responsibility of one and all. Replace the word
obligated
This
is because available benefits of maintaining healthy
lifestyle and pursuing studies are Add an article
a healthy
self-centered
and Change the spelling
self-centred
hence
, it is required to afford the financial burden by people
with themselves. However
, I believe it is not favorable
for everyone, Change the spelling
favourable
in
particularly, those who are Change preposition
apply
less-privileged
and potentially make them suffer from illness and literacy Correct your spelling
less privileged
result
in an unhappy life.
Wrong verb form
resulting
On the other hand
, those who advocate in favor
of government-funded healthcare and education illustrate Change the spelling
favour
that
the capability of enhancing good living standards of Correct word choice
apply
people
. This
implies that having cost-free access to medication and achieving academic prospects significantly improve both physical
and mental well-being of many individuals facilitating a quality way of living. Free education, Correct article usage
the physical
for example
, allows students to learn despite their social status and financial instability. Eventually, those are qualified to own an occupation with a handsome salary and prosperous life. I agree with this
viewpoint as it can potentially benefit everybody similarly
in a country and excel their lives in a positive direction.
In conclusion, although
it is reasonable to make people
afford their own medical and educational cost
individually, allocating funds for those services by the government facilitates Fix the agreement mistake
costs
it
more Correct pronoun usage
apply
accessible
and Replace the word
accessibility
efficient
for all and Replace the word
efficiency
therefore
it is more
paramount.Correct quantifier usage
apply
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