The chart shows requests for information at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June.

The chart shows requests for information at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June.
The line chart gives information about the number of tourists claimed for guidelines in terms of three categories (in person, by letter/email ,and by telephone) in a six-month period.
Overall
,people asked for information in person and calling increased in the given time.
On the other hand
, tourists who wrote letters or emails to get data dropped between January and June. There was a significant rise in the number of travellers who asked for guidelines in person. It started at just over 400 in January and was followed by a dramatic rise
then
peaked at over 1800
at the end
of the illustrate. The opposite trend was witnessed in the number of by letter/email, which slightly decreased in the first two months and considerably downed to almost 400 in May and remained stable in the
last
month.
Besides
, the figure for tourists by telephone experienced a rally at first and reached a plateau of 1000 between May and April. In the
last
three months, that gradually climbed to 1600.
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