The map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write atleast 150 words.
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The diagrams depict some proposed changes
about
both the current circumstance of the industrial area and future plans for it.
Change preposition
to
Overall
, the principal change to the Norbiton industrial area new facilities will have been erected in the future, Linking Words
while
some factories abolished.
The first map reveals that for the next ,years most factories will have been replaced with accommodation and other buildings needed in daily life. Farmland located in the north of the river will have relocated to the northeast. Factories laid down around the circle will have been restored with new houses and shops and one way will be stretched in a perpendicular form to the northwest of Linking Words
circle
. Add an article
the circle
a circle
Secondly
, one way from the circle will be expanded to the north across the river. Linking Words
Furthermore
, one of the manufactories recovered as a school, Linking Words
as well as
medical care and playground will be constructed.Linking Words
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