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One of the widely dicussed issues nowadays is finacially education of students

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One of the widely
dicussed
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discussed
 issues nowadays is
finacially
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financially
financial
 education of
students
. Now people are beginning to realize that
educational
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 system should be improved and
students
 have to clearly waste
money
. Personally, I tend to think that there should be
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entire
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 new subject, where
students
 learn to be
financial
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financially
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 educated.
Firstly
 it is well known that nowadays, there are a lot of non-working people in some countries, it is
consequence
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a consequence
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 of lack of financial education. What I mean here is that
,
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 they could spend
parents’
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their parents’
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money
, and
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not consider
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 responsibility for their life. One of the main
reason
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 behind
that is
 the can not able to financially of parents. A good case in point
this
, in Kazakhstan, most of
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 people do not separate from
parents
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their parents
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, they
also
 do not know
cost
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the cost
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 of
money
. Whilst, in Japan, schools have a special subject for
this
 purpose,
hence
 there are low poverty rate.
On the other hand
, it can
also
 be argued that in the world everything is getting more expensive,
therefore
, they have to properly manage
money
.
That is
 to say, if
students
 are not
financial
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financially
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 educated, they will not survive in
these
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 ‘expensive’ world. Take
for
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 example, life in
Europian
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European
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 countries is not
cheap
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a cheap
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 pleasure. In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account in our final analysis we can see that it is necessary to introduce
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silllabus
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syllabus
 or
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an educational
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 programme which
teach
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students
 how to manage their
money
.
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