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many businesses today are run by family members. Do the advantages of a family-run business outweigh the disadvantages?

#businesses #members #business
It has been observed that family members can enhance the business. there are myriad benefits
as well as
 drawbacks of family-based
work
.
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 my perspective, I believe that the disadvantages outweighed the advantages, because the family are a major sector of any improvement, so that, no
one
 the person can trust like the family. On the
one
 hand, there is the darker side of family
work
 collaboration is the conflicts between them for the
work
,
to begin
 ,
with
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 any different ideas can lead to
work
 disputes,
as
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 a result, there may
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conflict between each other. Since each person
of
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 the family
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work
 regards his self the business owner ,
however
, there is another partner there. because
this
 is a human creature.
For instance
, Bomma and Addisa clothes companies, both owners of each company brother and
initially
 they
were
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own
one
 company (Addidas),
as a result
 of conflict between them, they separated immediately. So
that
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, every person in the family should think a hundred times before taking any decision related to family businesses.
On the other hand
, there is a brighter side to relatives' business, the foremost
one
 that no
one
 the individual can trust like his relatives.
However
, the other people are suitable for
work
 and more proficient,
the
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 brother or sister is more reliable and trustworthy than
another persons
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 the world. and
this
 is because the family breed with each other and no
one
 can cheat the other.
furthermore
, it is impossible to see a brother cheating on his siblings.
That is
 why it is always recommended to
work
 with family since they are the primary motivator and supporters.
To conclude
, there are both merits and demerits of family participation in businesses,
however
, I believe, the ups outweighed the downs because the family are the best supporters around the world,
in addition
, they are reliable people and never cheat.
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