The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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of male and female

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individuals who live in dissimilar regions of the earth.

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South Asia, Arab States and Sub-Saharan Africa have the most

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inhabitants respectively, a tiny minority are not

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in three other mentioned locations.

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higher among women all around the world and it might be the direct result of

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domination that can be reinforced by underdevelopment. At first glance,

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the biggest population of

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dwellers

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more than half of its

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can not read or write and more than 30% of its men do not have

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ability.

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, the Arabean and African nations occupied the second and third ranks respectively in

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chart with 50%

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ladies and about 30%

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men that they have in their societies.

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10% of males and 20% of females are not able to read or write in eastern regions of Asia, nearly all of

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Topic Vocabulary:

Illiteracy rates
Region
Gender disparity
Bar chart
Estimated
Summarise
Main features
Comparisons
Analyzing
Discrepancies
Significant
Pronounced
Speculation
Male
Female
Global perspective
Literacy
Educational attainment
Socio-economic factors
Cultural influences

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The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the modern world, it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via the Internet and live without any face-to-face contact with others. Is it a positive or negative development in your opinion?

In today’s world, private companies rather than the government pay for and conduct most scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?