The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
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2008
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the 2008
consumption
by different forms of fuel since 1980 with prediction until 2030.
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consumption
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petrol
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natural
US
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the US
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consumption
for
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apply
from
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quadrillion
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show
the lowest Change the verb form
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consumption
from 3 to 2 quadrillion
units
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thrid
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third
consumption
from 4 to 6 quadrillion
units
.
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went up from 15.1 to 32 Correct article usage
a remarkable
quadrillion
units
, whereas
the natural gas show
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period from 20 to 25 Add an article
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units
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