The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart given compares the
number
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of America's
families
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by their yearly income over a period of eight years.
It is clear that
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the
families
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which were earning between 75k and approximately 100k a
year
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were in the minority.
Also
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, in 2011, the
number
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of households that were making 75 thousand dollars and above were at its lowest position in the graph. In the
year
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2007, there were 25
million
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families
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earning below 25,000 dollars, the figure increased to just below 30
million
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in 2011 and dropped to around 28
million
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in the
year
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2015. The
number
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difference between the
families
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that were receiving lower than $25k and the homes that were making an income between $25k and $50k was decreasing over the 8-
year
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period, going from approximately 2.5
million
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difference in 2007 to close to 0.5
million
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. The
number
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of
families
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that were making between $50k and $75k had not been changing, it remained at slightly above 20
million
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. Both of the numbers of households making from $75k to $100k and $100k and above showed a declining trend from the
year
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2007 to 2011, having a gap of 0.5
million
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and 2
million
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, respectively.
However
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, the figure for the $100k and above group had a dramatic increase, from 27
million
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to just below 35
million
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, families, k, year, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
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