Televised talent shows have become popular in many societies today. Are these shows a good method of finding talented people, or they are just entertainment ?

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complicated society, it has many people who foster the dream

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a famous

person

and they are very ambitious. They will try to find some ways to become a

person

that

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social platforms.

Hence

, many talented shows are created by many directors with many benefits, but

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have two sides. In my opinion, joining a talented show to become well-known is not a good measure to find some talented individuals. In general, people can see many advertisements about

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talented shows when they enter the social network. Thanks to

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benefit, the joiner can have attention from the viewers and they can have an opportunity to reach their goal more easily. Many shows like

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have widespread attraction around the world

such

as in Korea, in America, in Japan and in Viet Nam too. Thanks

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it, the judges can realize the real talent and the joiners pass the standard of the program, they will have

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training from many artists full of experience. If the competitor can be debuted through that, they will have

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strongly

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support from the staff of

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program and they can join some important events like music or act award shows.

Finally

, I think some competitions help the candidates too much, but it is not

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best way to find a talented

person

.

Nevertheless

, some shows spark a debate and have some bad information about

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. In the fact that if the joiner

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obey the rules, they will be fined

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many ways and

occassionally

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between the joiners but their fans don’t know about

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problem. The most popular thing in many competitions like

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is cheating. The company of some competitors will use money to bribe the directors and they can change the result

according to

their ideas. In my view, some talented shows are more properly with entertainment. They cannot be an alternative way to look for a

person

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full of skill and

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and if someone wants to be famous, they must do everything by themselves and

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depend on something that

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