In the future it may be necessary for us to live on other planets. For this reason some people believe that we should spend money now to research other planets, such as Mars. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In the upcoming years, the
earth
will not have enough land where humans can live comfortably. In order to overcome
this
issue, many individuals think that more money should be invested to explore
planets
like Mars. In my opinion, space exploration is not a good idea to rectify the issue of overpopulation as it is not economically feasible and ethically right. To start with, researching on
planet
like Mars needs a huge amount of investment.
This
is simply because exploring space there are innumerable expenses related to it
such
as the cost of manufacturing a rocket, the fuel, the astronaut's suits, and many more. Even
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another
planet
the same as the
Earth
, numerous things need to be changed like the atmosphere which will be impossible to achieve without a powerful budget.
For instance
, the USA spent more than eight hundred million dollars just to reach the moon. If
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think of creating living conditions on the
Earth
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any other
planet
it will result in economic depression around the world. Clearly,
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the issue of the increasing population around the globe, investigating the universe will result in loss.
Furthermore
, it is unethical to change other
planets
' characteristics for their own benefit. As each
planet
has something unique and those differences make them stand out from each other. In case, humans
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change Mars's atmosphere to make its living conditions the same as the
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, eventually, it will completely vanish the uniqueness of that
planet
which is not ethical. To illustrate, a person gets uncomfortable when somebody tries to point out his habits, in the same way, the individual does not know how that
planet
will react to those changes, which a human is trying to change.
Overall
, people should focus on
Earth
to make it a better place
for living
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. In conclusion, I believe that researching other
planets
will bring
unfavorable
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results not only for humanity but
also
for those
planets
which are being experimented on. Humans should keep in mind that space exploration programs need a significant amount of funding which can indirectly affect the inflation rate on the
earth
,
moreover
, altering anyone for their own advantage is against the moral values of humanity.
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